Pathfinder

Your wordplay is exquisite, as always.

The most realistic portrayal of Janeway arriving to earth story I have read to date.

Absolutely felt for the character that you created, she was very endearing. realistic.

You had me smiling like a fool at the back and forth between Janeway and Chakotay.

And I have used the phrase Stuffed Shirt to describe people, twice today.

 

All in all, what I have come to expect from you. Excellence.

I love this  beautiful work. Well done.

This was refreshingly new. I enjoyed Erica's POV, the irritation,  anger and then respect she had for KJ by the end was authentic. Kudos to her for making Kathryn call it a night. Kathryn visiting all the families in one night, or attempting to is so in her character. Loved how Gretchen sent Chakotay to bring her home.  Chakotay' and Kathryn's interaction was cute.

Holy smokes! That's just bloody brilliant. I haven't enjoyed a new story so much for a long time. One of the best post-Endgame stories I've read. Wow.