I loved the story. I enjoyed it.
Txs
Reviews For Breached
Reviewer: Nynaeve506 (Signed)
12/03/10 - 12:41 pm
I really enjoy your writing and this piece was so neat to read. Kathryn Janeway has always been a favorite of mine - and I've been an avid J/Cer since the show aired and I was 13? It feels so weird to admit that because I'm 27 now so it feels like a grew up with Voyager. Anyway, great story :)
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Reviewer: Tia Angelo--Fantastic Story for Breached (Anonymous)
30/06/09 - 08:54 pm
First off, I wanted to say thank you for telling an awesome epic story. I have never felt so over come with emotion then I did after reading this masterpiece of work. The plot was phenominal, and the details were exceptional. If I had only one critism to make, it would be the ending. I thought it ended a bit too abruptly-Not to say that it wasn't good, it was great. However, it left a since of closer that needed to be filled. The 7 months later part with Camet was FANTASTIC!!!! Poetic Justice to the end, but the latter , as I noted earlier, ended too quickly. We heard from B'Elanna' POV, but not Kathryn's. Thanx again for uploading a very powerful piece of literature. If you wish to contact me my email is collegegirl205@hotmail.com
Sincerly,
Tia Angelo
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Reviewer: Tomutionmyha (Anonymous)
16/05/09 - 06:28 pm
Powerful, riveting and intense. A very good story. I love the Belanna/Kathryn bonding and the no quick-fix ending. Shamefully, I must admit I want to believe Camet's demise was "appropriate" to his crimes -Revenge best served cold and eaten slowly.
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Reviewer: Hazmat (Signed)
02/03/09 - 08:31 pm
Amazing story! I'm so glad that they made it through and that that moster got what was coming to him! I really enjoyed the intensity and detail! Brilliant!
Chapter 5
Reviewer: Hazmat (Signed)
02/03/09 - 08:03 pm
Very intense! I hope they're found soon! No one should have to endure what they are going through! Amazing chapter!
Chapter 4
Reviewer: Hazmat (Signed)
02/03/09 - 07:37 pm
Very intense! Poor Kathryn! I hope she'll get better! Amazing story!
Chapter 3
Reviewer: Hazmat (Signed)
02/03/09 - 07:18 pm
Amazing chapter! I really enjoyed it! I hope they'll be okay! The ending was perfect!
Chapter 2
Reviewer: Hazmat (Signed)
02/03/09 - 06:03 pm
Wow! Very intense! I hope that it doesn't get to much worse for them! I enjoyed the comeroderie between Kathryn and B'Elanna! Perfect!
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Reviewer: Dawn (Anonymous)
13/07/08 - 09:29 pm
Wow, that was something. I'm going to have to mull over this one for awhile. A very good way of describing this, and I'm glad Kathryn never 'broke', nor did a simple hug fix the nightmares. Good job.
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Reviewer: Sue (Anonymous)
10/07/08 - 01:04 am
Gripping stuff. Couldn't put it down er, stop scrolling. Love a good Torres & Janeway story and this one was excellent!
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