I really, really enjoyed this story. This is a truely wonderful read, it is very natural and very believable. I really enjoyed the glimpse of KJ and B'Elanna's friendship. Kudos kiddo.
I did enjoy the story. It was very well written. I would of, however, liked to have seen Kathryn with a more balanced and fulfilling personal life after Chakotay chose Seven. I have never thought of her as sitting on a shelf waiting. Even though she feels things very deeply, I believe that she would have gotten over her feeling for Chakotay after he chose Seven. If she could come to grips with Justin’s death, a man who was literally her knight in shining armor. He did after all rescue her from the Cardassians. She should have been able to get over Chakotay, a man who turned from her to embrace a former Borg Drone. I can see Kathryn keeping him as a friend. But, he should of had to work a bit harder to become more than that. Kathryn is not the consolation prize, she is the first place trophy.