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Reviewer: STVDWSJATWRHfan (Signed)
22/03/09 - 07:19 pm
The revisions were better... I especially loved Tuvok and Naomi!!!

Author's Response:

Thanks :)

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Reviewer: LOZDWSJATWRHfan (Anonymous)
20/03/09 - 04:00 pm
I loved the story and Sekaya's tatoo explaination!!! but the ending was a bit abrupt. What about Seven? And no mention of Naomi and more of Seven and the Doctor and the individual reactions of the senior staff (actual words). A couple of spelling and grammer mistakes- its bear not bare and if you had not come after... not went after... Please add two more chapters- finish off the ball etc and maybe to see if Kathryn was joking about the twins... 

Author's Response:

I'm thrilled you enjoyed the story; I also really appreciate the feedback.  As for the additiona chapters, we'll have to wait and see what my muse can come up with. ;) 



Author's Response:

I'm thrilled you enjoyed the story; I also really appreciate the feedback.  As for the additiona chapters, we'll have to wait and see what my muse can come up with. ;) 



Author's Response:

I'm thrilled you enjoyed the story; I also really appreciate the feedback.  As for the additiona chapters, we'll have to wait and see what my muse can come up with. ;) 

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Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
20/03/09 - 05:25 am
Nice!! A wonderful addition and so glad you gave it to us!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I really appreciate the feedback :)

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I really appreciate the feedback :)
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Reviewer: Andrea (Anonymous)
20/03/09 - 04:04 am

Oh i just loved it! very well written and engaging. its a shame all the best stories have to end, but then we'd have to add libraries to our houses...



Author's Response:

Andrea,

I'm glad you enjoyed it, truth be told I'd been toying with this idea since the original story was posted. So thanks for the additional encouragement as well. :) 

 

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