Author's Response: Lol... Thank you Sue!:)
Author's Response: Yay! So happy I could make you laugh!:)
Author's Response: Glad you liked it! Thanks!
This was perfectly delightful!!! I absolutely loved the dialogue and the love/hate thing going on there for a while. Too cute. Thanks for the laughs!
Camryn
Author's Response: You're welcome!:)
In places it's very confusing who is speaking. I got bored around the middle and that's all I read- sorry!
Could use some good editing and tightening up and there's grammar mistakes.
Author's Response:
Hi Clara!
I'm sorry you found the story confusing and boring. That was not what I was going for, but you win some, you lose some eh?;)
With that said, I think both my beta and I would be thrilled if you could point out those grammar mistakes and where you think things should be tightened up. I realise you only made it half way through, but I'd like to improve on what I can, and see what we missed when we edited the story first time around.
Thanks!